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Not bad for just learning FL

But avoid using Slayer. Try some non-default VSTs.

What the fuck did I just listen to.

wat

Seriously.

The only song I have ever favorited.

I agree that the drums could be re-EQ'd though.

Keep it up. It's beautiful.

What...

I just.....wat

darcdebo responds:

it was quite delicious actually

Major Seventh Progressions...

...Are orgasmic. Especially GMaj7 to DMaj7. I play with that all the time.

I have an addiction to Major seventh chords. Most of my compositions( on guitar, outside of newgrounds) are in Major Seventh keys.

So, pretty much, I love you. The end.

AEPfx responds:

yay!! thanks a bunch, yeah im in to simple chords that you can do alot with

Hmm.

I can't believe people still give out zeros on here. Hmm.

It really isn't that bad. A few suggestions though:

The clicky clacky percussion could be lowered just a tad, and the instrumentation could be brought up just a bit.

The only other thing I can think of is when that ambient saw bass thing comes in, the note at :54 is out of key. The song is in a minor key, but that note is trying to make it a major. I would change that one note.

Other than that, I like the vibe this has, and think it will be great after a little more revision.

I could listen to the chorus for hours.

Im serious, and when I walk around cities, I have a tendency to sing the chorus to myself.

Wow.

I dont know what the fuck is up with the Zero Bombing, but this is definately worth more than a fucking 1.62

Great job man :)

DJLoneWolf responds:

thanks man, yeah i'm used to it, i think i attracted some people who'll always give me a 0 no matter what i upload when i signed up. I'm getting used to it though.

Good...

But Im pretty sure You ripped off Stanley Jordon Ass backwards.

Im pretty sure youve heard it, but check out his song" All the Children"

GameIntell10000 responds:

that happens to me a lot. lol.

Creepy...

Little Girl, 3 to 4, in a Completely Unlit room with scrapped teddy bear in hand with only the TV on, and the TV in mumbling out some Unrecognizable phrases, but there still chilling because You catch a couple words from each one of them.

"Run."

"Remember."

"Forget."

"Concentrate."

"Shiviah."

Etc.,etc.,etc.

DjRocALot responds:

Holy sh**! You just summed up the song and that is really a perfect scenario! :)

Roc A Lot

MEssage!

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